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« Thread Started on Feb 1, 2007, 9:02pm »

_{(err i thourght this here, then people might understand what going on with zara)

Tree's begining
Not many know of the trees. They where here before elves. They watched over the elfs and the other inhabitants of the lands, watching peacefully as they lived and died. they saw it all the riders gain to power, they felt the distubences of galbatorix and stoel an egg. White it was ,snow white its shining shell disappearing. it was soon regarded as another crushed egg. The trees took the eggs deep into the forests farawy from galbatorix. and left in a clearing guarded from those who would wish to destroy it. There the trees knew that one day its rider shall come and find it.

Zara's begining
selena was riding hard, she was pregnunt and feared for it's safty she was fleeing to her brother garrow. when she arrived she staied months until one faithful day came, when garrow and his wife help seleana give birth to not one baby but 2, a girl then a boy. she was almost in dispair she had to seporate them and hide them, together she realised they could be powerful. she looked to the boy and named in Eragon, then to the girl, Zara she named her. she then made garrow and his wife swear in hte anchent lanugage never to tell anyone of her zara's exsistence. The next day she left with the bundle in her lap, leaveing Eragon behind. she traveled far away, leaveing her in the care of strangers telling only that ehr name was Zara. She left riding hard away.

A Rider found (zara)
When zara reached the age of 15, she was cast out of her dreadful home. they weren't her family, she hated them. They treated her like a slave. she had fourght back and now she had no home. Fine she didn't need one, she was an excellent with her bow, and could hunt well. she set off into hte near deep forests, where the travellers had told her there would be meat. For weeks she traveled alone. she didn't know she was going but didn't care ethier. though one day she spotted a clearing upon a stump in hte middle was a gleaming white stone.

Zara looked at the stone with amazment, she walked to it and touched it gently, then picked it up. it was hard, and yet smooth made out of some very strong substances, though what she did not know. she made camp, only leaveing the clearing to get water or to hunt. she was transfixed by the stone. on the 3rd day while she was eating she heard it. the tap tap tap. she looked the stone, and it was cracked. she got and up and looked more closely and ithin minuetes a baby dragon was sitting quietly lookning up at her, its white eyes where fixed on her blue ones. she smiled and reached to touch it. the energy surged through her and so now she was Rider Zara.

A Rider Found (trees)
They waited for years and years, no one came apart from one, but he do not see hte egg lay upon throne. Words the reached the trees of another egg out of galbatorix's rule. they thourght of returning it to the elfs inwhich they stole it from. but then a girl came, and they sensed her presences. She had stopped tuoching the eggs, they sensed in her mind that she ment no harm to the eggs and so they did not reavel them sleves and drive her away. To the tree's delight their egg hatched, and the their hope restored, they gathered their powers ready to train this rider but first they must comunicate. Something that the trees had not done for millions of years.

The training
They appeared suddenly in her mind voices, a strange language she did not understand thens he herad a faint whsipering. She knew that it ment Hello Zara, she spoke herself and was surprised when they faint whisper came from her own mouth Hello who are you and so the trees continued to explain what they had done, starting with the story of the dragonriders on to why the dragon was there, and what was to become of her. Zara felt a sense of belong, and aeccpted the training. for years they trained under the eyes of the trees. they knew the training also teahcing her of the history and secrets of her kinds. though riders toook great lenghs to stop people from learning their secrest the trees knew them, not much can hide from the trees.

Destiny
Zara had grown into a beautiful women. she wore white chothes and bore white armour in battle. her most worn were her boots, snow white with magic placed upon htem so they would never stain. they went up tp her knees. she also wore a black clock. with a tree embriodered on to the back. it was symbol of the anchent trees. she stood strong the trees had to tell her soemthing. she had completed her training now. she had ponited eyes like an elf and the strength of one too. she had trained hard. she sat upon her dragon maza. he was big now, though she remembers his first days. She sat waiting the trees had called her, she knew it was time to leave and find her destiny. she had trealign things already on her saddle. including her blade. another tree magical item. they told her "it would compete well againest an elfs hand for as thet may think they are old and know old secrets we are older" thats what tree shran had said. she sighed, her mind open she said to maza i feel a sense of aprehension amoung the trees what do you think they are going to tell us

The white hued dragon felxed his neck, his scaled glittering in the sunlight that flikered between the trees, his voice was carm and deep, i don't know zara,but i know what you mean he blinked waiting sighing, smoke raiseing out of his nostrals. making patterns with it

Very funny maza zara smiled. she liked to smile, and maza did it for her, then she herad their call and turned her attention to the trees

Rider Zara. for long time we debated on telling you this no its time you know, open you mind to us

zara did so and the trees took hold taking her deep back showing her first memory, her birth. It took about minuetes for them to finish. Zara was silent, she had a twin brother. she looked to them and asked What's his name

Eragon, the trees tell us he is a rider also, seek him out, there is little more we can teach you Rider Zara

She nodded she had spent years here, she knew trees well, but she knew in her heart she had to leave,

Maza felt the pain of her emotions and sympathised. he utter Lets go and he leaped into the air zara on his back though he did not worry, he knew she could stay on easy years of practice had sene to it and now he flew his powerful wings beating down on the wind moveing light and swift towards their destiny}

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« Reply #1 on Feb 22, 2007, 5:22pm »

_{Ebony's Tale

Ebony was 3 years of age, she was of a little known deep forest herd of horses, known by the few who did for their stamina, speed ,strengh and intelliegence. Ebony was matureing this next year, though she didn't want a foal so early on in her life. she wandered her home boundries, going deeper into the forest she lived in. She walked her hoofs barely making a noise on the rot covered ground. she looked round one tree and to her amazment, saw a human girl, she was blonde, and thin, extremerly thin, dirty and rbuised. her back was stained with blood and there were many rips in her clothes. Ebony looked and there was a small white creature no bigger then a wolf. She looked at it not noticeing the girl approche, she looked up the human girl had walked towards her. ebony's first intinct was to run, and tell hte herd, but something deep down told her to stay. then the girl spoke in a whispering, looking back behind her. Ebony looked too, confused, she looked at the girl, her choclatey brown eyes shinning. then something flashed and she heard a voice in her head that she understood

Ebony of the deep forest herd of horses, will you bare a gift so this dragon rider can have steed while her dragon grows

Ebony froze the voice was whispering in her head, she stared the girl was smileing kindly at her even inher adismal state. ebony knew that hte trees where powerful here, her parents had targht her that and it was in said that to bare there gift was a huge blessing. ebony didn't need long, the girl looked kind and gently and the dragon she could get over she spoke with her mind unsure if she was doing it right, and was pleased when it did i will . suddenly there was a flash of white light and she fell unchonchus, the power too much for her to handle.

Ebony had bared zara on her back for only a couple of weeks, then maza, the white hued dragon was old enough to bar eher. ebony had grown friendly and attached tot he human girl and her dragon. and zara to ebony to. she stuck around learning her language and the ancient language. she watched her training and helped when possible. but when zara was 23. and ebony was 11. ebony wanted a life of her own, but she had more of an effect of hte gift of the trees then zara, she had seen things, a blonde rider and a dark haired rider, both male, when she had asked about them to the trees, they had warned her never to tell zara of them. she and zara had heard of a few deep forest trees that where there, one was the spine, known for its enchanting trees by those of the deep forest. She had decided to live there, and maybe find a mate, also, one of her visions had invloved a near human town called carvahall, and she felt deep in her heart that hse would meet zara again oneday. She had left to find a newlife and destiny}

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